Original Characters groupshot -WIP-

this is a work in progress, so that's why the colors are so dull

you might remember these guys, for those who have been watching me since 2005, when i first joined DA! and now allow me to reintroduce these guys to my new watchers! the tall gentlemen with the eye patch is Rio Godmenn, a retired solider and step-uncle to our main character
his first design was this ->
on the other side, her name is Samantha Tech, the human super mechanic and computer nerd who has robotic implants after a horrible accident from her past
her original design was this ->
and lastly, our main hero, who when through several renames when i first made her! the rejected names included: "Yuki", "Riku", and "Aoki" (yes i was i big anime nerd at one point =v=;; ) so now i finalized everything now she will be know as Valkarye Lafeyette!
Valkarye's original designs are as followed: and lastly

i'd love to here feed back, so tell me what you think! hopefully it's alot better then their first drafts

i'll explain the story one day